Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate

whether

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advertising is entertaining or aggravating, it has no effect on customers’ decisions when they go shopping. While

this

statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that it has certain influences on consumer’s

choice

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. Without a shadow of a doubt, there are numerous factors that influence a

purchase

besides

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, especially the price of the product. It cannot be denied that if a customer's financial resources are insufficient, no matter how much advertising is given, they will choose not to buy the merchandise.

For example

, Foreo facial cleanser has not truly convinced users to buy it because of its prohibitive price, despite being widely advertised and receiving positive reviews for

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quality and effectiveness.

Hence

, the buying choice may not be influenced by advertising.

On the other hand

consumer’s

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behavior

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behaviour

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is somewhat influenced by advertising. In

this

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fast - paced

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world, coming across ads is a daily occurrence.

Therefore

, by using advertisements, the enterprise’s item can catch consumers’ eyes and make them have a snap decision to

purchase

For instance

, thanks to the cooperation with KOLs and running ads on the

tiktok

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TikTok

platform, Tingoan has attracted numerous customers and

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its

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revenue increased significantly.

Hence

, advertising has an immeasurable power of impact on shoppers’ choices of goods. In conclusion, advertising can

both

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apply

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attract customers to buy a product, but it is not enough to make them make a

purchase

decision.

However

, it has a large contribution to

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the

purchase

decision of customers.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Consumer behavior
Desensitization
Persuasive
Brand perception
Shopping habits
Marketing tactics
Selective attention
Online advertising
Traditional media
Cultural background
Ethical considerations
Ad saturation
Advertising literacy
Brand loyalty
Consumer skepticism
Target audience
Emotional appeal
Cognitive dissonance
Impulse buying
Ad avoidance

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