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Some people think universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. Other believe that this is unacceptable policy. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern era, gender equality in every subject is suggested to become a policy of universities by some people, while others consider
this
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an
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intolerable
 idea. Personally, I disagree with the former. As time passes, there have been changes in the
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 system, which result in a lack of
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 to apply for jobs for both men and women. People foresee the consequence and have made attempts to solve the problem, including the law that
an equal numbers
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 of male and female
students
 in every subject should be accepted in universities.
This
 creates a way to eliminate the unbalance of
student’s
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 gender distribution in numerous majors,
such
 as IT which consist of
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 men, while women
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 a significant interest in clothes designing.
However
, not everyone likes the method. All universities have an admission limit, and by generating the
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equality
equalty
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equality
, schools will have to decline
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 of many
students
.
In other words
, they are
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force
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 to choose a different major, which makes it inconvenient.
Moreover
, post-graduates may have trouble finding an occupation, as some employers favour one gender over another,
for example
: engineering. Having stated all factors, the idea to accept equal numbers of male and female
students
 in every subject is not really effective.
Instead
 of tightening the gap between two
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 employees,
this
 creates even more disturbing matters. All in all, it is not suitable to create
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 of male and female
students
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.
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