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You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the opportunity to shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter with regards to want same
second
-hand furniture for my rented Home.
To begin
 with, I heard about your shop from one of my friends and he told me that there are verities of furniture are available for shopping. So, would like to ask about the list you have in your centre.
Moreover
, most important I need to buy a bed, a set of
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the sofa
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sofa
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 as well as a cupboard to keep my cloth along with a table and chair for
study
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 and to keep my books inside the drawer.
This
 is my primary requirement, will be appreciating it if you send
other
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 a list so I can buy another thing as well if within my budget.
Finally
, will be great if you provide the same amount of discount on each item so, it will be easy to choose other small to buy. Would be great if you send a list with
a
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 price of the address given
in
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 the cover
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letter. I look forward to receiving your response Yours faithfully, Rohit Mane.
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