You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve ttE food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude to your hotel. Please be informed that Linking Words
last
Saturday, August 13, I organized our monthly meeting in one of your conference rooms on the Linking Words
second
floor.
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Firstly
, the lobby is so clean and the smell is so sweet, it looks like we are in paradise. Linking Words
Secondly
, the bathroom that we used during the meeting is not crowded. Linking Words
Lastly
, the staff of the hotel are very friendly. Unfortunately, the food is not good. It is not delicious, Linking Words
for example
, the fried chicken is not crispy and very salty. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the fish that was served at that time are not fresh.
Kindly note that we are planning to organize again an event in your hotel, Linking Words
thus
, we do appreciate it if you could address that incident. Linking Words
For example
, please check your food before serving them and training for your staff is needed.
I hope my complaints will help your company. Thank you for reading my letter.
Yours faithfully,
Marica De MesaLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite