You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in local hotel. In their feeback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, 1. say what the participants liked about the hotel 2. explain why they were unhappy about the food 3. suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Smith and I am writing
this
to you to give you the feedback about your hotel that I had organised an all-day meeting recently.
Many participants liked the hotel and its cleanliness. Linking Words
However
, they didn't like the food ,especially the seafood that was served for both meals in which seafood was not really fresh and a few dishes were too oily. And there was no vegetable dish too even though I requested to include one. Linking Words
Also
, the cake was too sweet and the coffee was like water.
Since the meeting was all day long and they only had a short meal break of about an hour and the distance to the nearest food court was about 30 minutes away. So it is impossible for them to go and eat outside.
Due to the aforementioned inconvenience, many participants were unhappy and they have requested not to use your hotel Linking Words
next
time. Linking Words
Thus
, I would like to suggest the manager take Linking Words
this
as a good lesson and try to improve the food in future.
Yours Faithfully,
SmithLinking Words
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