You are going to give a party to your friends. Write a letter to your friend living in a foreign country and ask him to help you to teach a special recipe. In your letter * Why are you giving a party * Why you want to learn that recipe * Invite him to the party Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Max, It has been quite a long time since we contacted

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between. Hope you are in sound health. You might

came

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to know that my company promoted me as the head of

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marketing in the Middle-east, which was quite unexpected. You know that my friends were always with me in advising

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choose the right career, and

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I decided to give all of them, including you for a

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, which I am going to organize by the end of

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month. I remember a special dish which you served me

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year when I visited you. I think it is named

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‘Margherita Pizza’, a pipping hot Italian pizza. You told

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it is made with some simple ingredients, and can be served within half an hour. I really want to learn from you how to prepare it, so that I can serve it at the

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. I know that you have some days’ vacation

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month, and I expect you to take it by the month end

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so that you can attend the

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here. Your presence is something very special to me. I have already told my colleagues that you will be there for the

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. Hope to see you at least a day before the

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. Best regards Markie

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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