You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint.. In your letter, you should tell: Say why you are writing and how you feel Explain what happened Tell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear sir or madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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to express my dissatisfaction with

unacceptable

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the unacceptable

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behavior

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behaviour

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of your personnel. I am Amin Mahmoodipour, one your company subscribers that asked for a taxi to

airport

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the airport

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yesterday morning. The

first

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negative note that I should draw your attention to is that the driver was late about 10 minutes. I and my family were

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front of the door and when he got to our location, I objected

why

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to why

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he was late. To make it worse, he responded in

such

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an offensive way that my child burst into tears and I had to keep her calm till we got

the

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to the

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destination. Being late to get

the

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to the

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gates, We could hardly

convinced

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the flight team to accept our tickets because we were late. After

that

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I called the customer service office

for

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apply

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several times and

unfortunately

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no_one

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no one

was responsible for my complaint. I

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sent an email to explain what happened

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that time and I recognized that the email service is outdated too. Having

such

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problems, I would like to make an appointment with the company manager to know more about them. Perhaps I could make some suggestions for your team members

especially

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the mentioned driver, I think it is useful to guide your personnel to take part in some interchange classes to get more about how to behave politely. I am looking forward to receiving from you soon. Faithfully yours.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

243 words

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