Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available Dear Mrs Barrett,

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in the advertised position for the upcoming summer.

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, I am a multi-skilled personality to look after many things at a time despite busy schedules

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as taking notes while listening to others.

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, assisting others while focusing on daily

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, I can

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take care of the gardening

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at 6pm. Undoubtedly, I am coming from a poor family and

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job can help me to come out of all my debts. On the other side, I need to pay my school fees which cost me an arm and a leg.

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job is much required in all ways. As I explained, I am excited to accept the

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right from August

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week onwards as I am going to complete my final year exams.

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, it is very hard to join in July due to critical project

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which I am doing at a well-reputed company in the town. I look forward to hearing your response with the good news about my joining date. Hope it will come. I would really appreciate it if you could let me know if any additional information is required from my end. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Mon Aug 15 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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