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Explain Australia's coffee and tea drinking trends.

#australia #coffee #tea #trends
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The bar chart illustrates Australia’s
coffee
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 and
tea
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 purchasing and consumption habits in
Sydney
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, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart during the
last
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 4 weeks. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that Australian residents mostly went outside to a café for having
tea
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 or
coffee
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.
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, buying fresh
coffee
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 is not very popular among Australians.
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 with, 44% of
Sydney
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 residents bought fresh
coffee
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 in the past 4 weeks, whereas 45% of them purchased instant
coffee
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.
However
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, 61% of the
Sydney
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 population preferred going to a café for
tea
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 and
coffee
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.
Moreover
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, Melbournians demonstrated similar data when compared with
Sydney
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, as 43% of the citizens bought fresh
coffee
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, while 48% paid for instant
coffee
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 during the past 4 weeks.
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, Melbourne had the maximum proportion of residents (64%) who went to the
coffee
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 shop for
tea
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 or
coffee
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. The percentage of people who consumed fresh
coffee
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 in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart over the
last
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 28 days was 34%, 34.5%, and 38%, respectively.
Furthermore
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, interest in instant
coffee
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 is comparatively high in the population of Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart, as the percentage was 53%, 50%, and 54%,
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