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Explain Australia's coffee and tea drinking trends.

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The bar chart illustrates Australia’s
coffee
 and
tea
 purchasing and consumption habits in
Sydney
, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart during the
last
 4 weeks. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that Australian residents mostly went outside to a café for having
tea
 or
coffee
.
Secondly
, buying fresh
coffee
 is not very popular among Australians.
To begin
 with, 44% of
Sydney
 residents bought fresh
coffee
 in the past 4 weeks, whereas 45% of them purchased instant
coffee
.
However
, 61% of the
Sydney
 population preferred going to a café for
tea
 and
coffee
.
Moreover
, Melbournians demonstrated similar data when compared with
Sydney
, as 43% of the citizens bought fresh
coffee
, while 48% paid for instant
coffee
 during the past 4 weeks.
Besides
, Melbourne had the maximum proportion of residents (64%) who went to the
coffee
 shop for
tea
 or
coffee
. The percentage of people who consumed fresh
coffee
 in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart over the
last
 28 days was 34%, 34.5%, and 38%, respectively.
Furthermore
, interest in instant
coffee
 is comparatively high in the population of Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart, as the percentage was 53%, 50%, and 54%,
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