You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Hi madam Li I am a citizen living in New Castle town. I appreciate your writing the article published in a national newspaper saying the beautiful scenery about my town

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. You are right every shopping

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is crowded and busy. But I am afraid that my place

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is different from the other place.

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with, we have an organic farm market located in the east area which is rare to see in other cities.

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, We have a strong free internet net built in

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. Everyone can use free wifi which makes both buyers and sellers very happy.

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, my friend David coming from the UK was surprised by the amazing wifi design. To sum up, I will give you a rough guide about my hometown. Taking the No.1 bus to Yulong Road,

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you will see the big entry arch door at the beginning. Walk straight through the road you can find a primary souvenir in a shop which will make you happy. Turn right at the end of Yulong Road you will see a big plaza there, it is our Feihuang shopping mall, If you go the opposite way, you can have the best cuisine there. Hope you can have a good journey in my town. Best wishes, Cole Chen

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