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Marriage is seen as an important part of life. What are advantages and disadvantages of marrying a person at a young age?

#marriage #part #life #person #age
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There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of
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the wedding
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wedding
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 is seen as
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 precious part of humans lives.One school of thought opinion that it is worthless,
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however
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 others consider that a couple of problems
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 has a plethora of merits yet numerous demerits are
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 upcoming paragraphs. On the brighter side,the topic has
multitude
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 of benefits
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 and foremost reason.In the past , older people of the village married
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 daughter or son at
the
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 young
age
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.They promise
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a friend
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friend
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 that their children will be married at the
age
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 they decided because of
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 the children become
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responsible
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rresponsible
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responsible
 at
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, and
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 parents get relief from the tension of the marriage as
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 juvenile future is secured .To cite an example,
elder
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 people of the family decide to
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the proposal
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proposal
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of
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 the other party and with
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 similar thought ,they decided
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 wedding of their adolescent .
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 going
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 the families. On the darker side, wedding's at
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earlier
eariler
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earlier
age
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 harm the
personsnality
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personality
 of the individual and give birth to the problem of
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over population
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overpopulation
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.
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,youngsters do
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 at
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 young
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age's
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 and
than
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 faces oodles of problems in their future as
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their
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believes
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 are different
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 they decided to take
divorse
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divorce
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 depression .
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 ,they gave birth to a child at
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 ,which increase the population of the country ,
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 gave rise to
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other problem
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shortage
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 of food , houses and so on.As a consequence ,marriages at
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 young
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age's
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 become a big danger to the country as well as to the youngsters. In a nutshell,without any doubt,
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 points notion may not be underestimated.The public of the nation should
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 the law, as young blood should marry each other at the
age
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 decided by the state.

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