The key to solving the environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. Agree/disagree?

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Nowadays, Environmental issues are

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major concern for human

being

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and to solve these problems today's

generation

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have

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to sacrifice their comfortable lifestyle for the betterment of the next generations.

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statement and the reasons will analysed in the following paragraphs with a reasonable conclusion. The

upmost

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point is that to make our life better the environmental problems

raised

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. To explain it more, people

develop

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the

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machiner

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to make work easier and faster, but those machines

spreading

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the

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pollution which harms

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the

climate

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and nature, and from that next

generation

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will not live their life as their elders live now.

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, cars

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a human beings

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to do a relaxed ride, but they

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release

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carbon dioxide which is very dangerous for

surroundings

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and harmful

disease

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occur in residences. So, they have to avoid those types of convenient lifestyles for their future

generation

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, the

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changed and food items

affected

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by that. To elaborate

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properly, pollution

change

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the

environment

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conditions and it directly impacts

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food

productions

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because those meals growing

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in today

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today

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today's

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climate

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they

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would not grow in affected surroundings, and from that food production will not

enough

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for their children.

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year in India and other native countries the production of wheat was not good as compared to past years and experts estimated that

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happened

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climate

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change. In conclusion, today's

climate

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and nature are harmful and present humankind is responsible for

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, and they have to solve these environmental issues by immolation of nowadays living style on the account that their future

generation

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will live their life

peacefuly

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peacefully

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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