You have seen an advertisement in an Australian Magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter: - explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your time while you are in Australia.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope my letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to express my interest regarding on the advertisement that you posted in Australian Magazine

last

Saturday. Please be informed that I am really interested in the job since I have experience in how to take care of young ones.

Firstly

, please note that I am very flexible. I can adapt directly to the environment. Another one is, having too many nephews and nieces way back home,

therefore

, communication is not an issue.

Secondly

, I have experience in volunteering in teaching kids how to respect old people as well as a proper way to greet them conducted by our local town.

Lastly

, I believe

this

is a good chance for me to acquire new skills that I can use later on.

Thus

, appreciated it if you could consider my application. Kindly note that while waiting for the result, I will be using my free time to explore the country. I will be visiting the famous Niagara Falls. Should you have any concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Elvera Guza

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

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