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Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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people in
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these days
, especially in
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developing countries, prefer to have fewer
children
 or none at all for some reasons that can make their life difficult.
Moreover
, I do not assume that
this
 is a good trend for the
world
.
Firstly
, they do not desire to take in obligation for many
children
 and want to give all their attention to
one
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Nowadays
, the cost not only for living but
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also
 for other aspects
such
 as education, medical care and
transportion
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transportation
 is increasing significantly day by day and
then
 it is too difficult to support for
one
 person. For
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, students do not need to charge for
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attending
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attending
 the schools in the past
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 whereas every student needs to charge for admission
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these days
.
Subsequently
, they want to concentrate fully on
one
 child
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because
becasue
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because
 they
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belive
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 that supporting
one
 child to be a well-educated student is better than giving both their time and energy
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 many
children
 whether they are not sure their
children
 will be successful or not.
Secondly
, I do not assume that it is a good trend because it leads the
world
 to be less populated and society to become solitary and old-dated. And
then
, the population of the
world
 will be diminished considerably If every couple
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all over the
world
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 to have fewer
children
 or none at all,
In addition
, the environment can be both pleasant and perfect only if it is
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 by
children
 who can make people peaceful. When there are few
children
, the surrounding will not be innovative because
children
 are the ones who are both intelligent and active compared with other aged groups. In conclusion, most of the people in developing nations prefer to have few
children
 or none at all because they do not want to take the responsibility for many
children
. From my point of view, it is not a good trend for the reasons that are mentioned above.
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