These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go yo sporting or cultural events. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

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the events, so some people think
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both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural phenomena
  • Economic stimulation
  • Live entertainment
  • Financial implications
  • Social benefits
  • Commercialization
  • Exclusionary pricing
  • Sustainability concerns
  • Cultural accessibility
  • Social experience
  • Extravagant spending
  • Civic engagement
  • Artistic patronage
  • Sports fanaticism
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