People say it is the responsibility of the residents to keep the environment clean and tidy while others think it is the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion with examples.
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maintaining
maintain
mainting
a pristine mother nature is Correct your spelling
maintaining
task
of each, while, Add an article
the task
a task
others
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others'
other's
is
responsible to act Change the verb form
are
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on
this
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to take good care of our environment. Add an article
the task
a task
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regarding who Change to a plural noun
opinions
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is
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surroundings
sorroundings
.
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surroundings
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On
one
hand, keeping each backyard clean and more presentable are Correct article usage
the one
tasks
of each household, ninety Fix the agreement mistake
task
percent
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per cent
waste
we observe in public Change preposition
of waste
place
originate from residential houses. Fix the agreement mistake
places
Segration
of Correct your spelling
Segregation
waste
and proper waste
disposal starts from home. Example
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buried
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bury
waste
,
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apply
plastics
products in a bag Change the noun form
plastic
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in order
inorder
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in order
public
dump track to Correct article usage
a public
dispose
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ofdispose
in
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of
proper
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a proper
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landfill
land fill
.
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landfill
On the other hand
, the public officials has
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have
duty
to Add an article
a duty
the duty
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knowledge and firm rules on how to properly Correct your spelling
disseminate
dispose
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ofdispose
waste
product, and provide logistics Correct your spelling
in order
inorder
to transport Correct your spelling
in order
this
waste
to proper
place. Add an article
the proper
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Additionally
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elected officials Correct your spelling
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holds
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hold
large
amount of budget to maintain Change the article
a large
cleanliness
and Correct article usage
the cleanliness
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wellness
wellnes
of nature. Correct your spelling
wellness
For instance
, Singapore named top
country for Correct article usage
the top
good
environment, Add an article
a good
this
small country has the most stricker
rules on maintaining good and decent Correct your spelling
stricter
sorroundings
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surroundings
harsh
punishment will be given who Correct word choice
and harsh
cought
not put their Correct your spelling
caught
ought
waste
on where must be belong
. Change the verb form
belong
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, they have the most advance
way Replace the word
advanced
on
how Change preposition
of
to eliminate
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eliminating
trashes
.
In conclusion, Maintaining good and neat Correct subject-verb agreement
trash
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surroundings
sorroundings
are Correct your spelling
surroundings
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responsibilities
responsibility
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the responsibilies
responsibilies
of both individuals and ministry. Helping each other makes more Correct your spelling
responsibility
job
easier and simpler, at the end of the Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
day
we are the Add a comma
,day
one
who will enjoy Correct pronoun usage
ones
bounty
of nature.Add an article
the bounty
a bounty
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