People say it is the responsibility of the residents to keep the environment clean and tidy while others think it is the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion with examples.

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a pristine mother nature is
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responsible to act
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matter. On my
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each person has
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to take good care of our environment.
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thesis will discuss both
opinion
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regarding who
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more liable in present
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sorroundings
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one
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the one

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hand, keeping each backyard clean and more presentable are
tasks
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task

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of each household, ninety
percent
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waste
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of waste

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we observe in public
place
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places

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originate from residential houses.
Segration
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Segregation

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of
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and proper
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disposal starts from home.
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, My father made a dump hole in our backyard to
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organic
waste
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,
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and put
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plastic

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products in a bag
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in order
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in order

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inorder
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to be collected by
public
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a public

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dump track to
dispose
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ofdispose

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in
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of

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proper
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a proper

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landfill
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landfill

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land fill
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, the public officials
has
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duty
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the duty

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dessiminate
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disseminate

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knowledge and firm rules on how to properly
dispose
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ofdispose

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waste
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product, and provide logistics
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inorder
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to transport
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waste
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to
proper
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place.
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elected officials
holds
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large
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amount of budget to maintain
cleanliness
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and
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wellness
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wellness

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wellnes
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wellness
of nature.
For instance
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top
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country for
good
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a good

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environment,
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small country has the most
stricker
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stricter

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rules on maintaining good and decent
sorroundings
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surroundings

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,
harsh
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punishment will be given who
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caught
ought

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not put their
waste
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on where must
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, they have the most
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way
on
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how
to eliminate
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trashes
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. In conclusion, Maintaining good and neat
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surroundings
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sorroundings
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responsibilities
responsibility
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responsibilies
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responsibility
of both individuals and ministry. Helping each other makes more
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easier and simpler, at the end of the
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we are the
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who will enjoy
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of nature.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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