In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, it become popular among the youth generations to

take

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used attire. In my opinion, I think

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due to

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the economic situation that the world is facing. I

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believe that it is a positive development, it is cheaper and helps to get rid of attires that are not in use.

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, taking used clothing is cheaper than buying a new one. you may find a piece

that is

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worth a lot of money, just for the

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help

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price.

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, one month ago my sister wanted to buy a dress for her friend's wedding, when she went to the market she found a dress and liked it, but cost 300$, and her budget was only 200$, she came back home upset,

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while

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she was scrolling in Facebook she found an advertisement in a second-hand group for selling, the same costume and only for 130$. she bought it directly and was surprised that the dress looked in a good condition and kept 80$ of her budget. So, it is more saving money, if you buy used

clothes

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, it is a good way to get rid of

clothes

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, which are not in use. In

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, most people expenditures on a lot of things that they do not really need it.

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, I have a cupboard full of

clothes

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I just bought for the good-looking, most of them I have worn once only and others are still new.

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, I have two or three pieces that I keep wearing in my daily life. It

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be more beneficial if I could give them to someone who really wants

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them

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, and buy

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the cash something that I actually need. In conclusion, the deterioration of the economy results in the appearance of the phenomenon, of exchanging old

clothes

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for cash and buying it. I believe it is a positive development that helps, on

one

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the one

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hand, to rid of old things you don't need and for others to buy them cheaper.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

The debate exists on whether young people should have the freedom to select their own profession or if they should adopt a pragmatic approach, considering their future more seriously. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that education is a fundamental right and plays a crucial role in the development of individuals and societies. Discuss the importance of education and the factors that contribute to a successful education system.

Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, such as the army, While others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that robots are important for humankind's future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.