In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, it become popular among the youth generations to

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used attire. In my opinion, I think

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due to

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the economic situation that the world is facing. I

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believe that it is a positive development, it is cheaper and helps to get rid of attires that are not in use.

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, taking used clothing is cheaper than buying a new one. you may find a piece

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worth a lot of money, just for the

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help

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price.

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, one month ago my sister wanted to buy a dress for her friend's wedding, when she went to the market she found a dress and liked it, but cost 300$, and her budget was only 200$, she came back home upset,

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while

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she was scrolling in Facebook she found an advertisement in a second-hand group for selling, the same costume and only for 130$. she bought it directly and was surprised that the dress looked in a good condition and kept 80$ of her budget. So, it is more saving money, if you buy used

clothes

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, it is a good way to get rid of

clothes

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, which are not in use. In

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, most people expenditures on a lot of things that they do not really need it.

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, I have a cupboard full of

clothes

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I just bought for the good-looking, most of them I have worn once only and others are still new.

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, I have two or three pieces that I keep wearing in my daily life. It

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be more beneficial if I could give them to someone who really wants

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them

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, and buy

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the cash something that I actually need. In conclusion, the deterioration of the economy results in the appearance of the phenomenon, of exchanging old

clothes

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for cash and buying it. I believe it is a positive development that helps, on

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hand, to rid of old things you don't need and for others to buy them cheaper.

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