In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it become popular among the youth generations to
take
used attire. In my opinion, I think Verb problem
wear
this
is due to
the economic situation that the world is facing. I also
believe that it is a positive development, it is cheaper and helps to get rid of attires that are not in use.
Firstly
, taking used clothing is cheaper than buying a new one. you may find a piece that is
worth a lot of money, just for the helf
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help
its
price. Change preposition
of its
For example
, one month ago my sister wanted to buy a dress for her friend's wedding, when she went to the market she found a dress and liked it, but cost 300$, and her budget was only 200$, she came back home upset, then
, while
she was scrolling in Facebook she found an advertisement in a second-hand group for selling, the same costume and only for 130$. she bought it directly and was surprised that the dress looked in a good condition and kept 80$ of her budget. So, it is more saving money, if you buy used clothes
.
On the other hand
, it is a good way to get rid of clothes
, which are not in use. In another word
, most people expenditures on a lot of things that they do not really need it. Fix the agreement mistake
other words
For instance
, I have a cupboard full of clothes
I just bought for the good-looking, most of them I have worn once only and others are still new. However
, I have two or three pieces that I keep wearing in my daily life. It will
be more beneficial if I could give them to someone who really wants Wrong verb form
would
it
, and buy Correct pronoun usage
them
with
the cash something that I actually need.
In conclusion, the deterioration of the economy results in the appearance of the phenomenon, of exchanging old Change preposition
apply
clothes
for cash and buying it. I believe it is a positive development that helps, on one
hand, to rid of old things you don't need and for others to buy them cheaper.Correct article usage
the one
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