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The didagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph display how much one nation’s
export
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 was worth in 5 different categories in 2015 and 2016, while the table illustrates how much
export
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values
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 for the 5 categories changed in percentage terms in 2016 compared to 2015. Overall,
export
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 earnings increased in 2016, in all categories except gems and jewellery.
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, textiles
export
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 increased to the highest percentages that year. In detail, petroleum
products
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 and engineered goods were the two most valuable
products
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 in both years; their
values
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 were around $61
billion
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 and $58
billion
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 respectively in 2015 and
then
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 both
values
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 went up to approximately $62
billion
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 in 2016.
Export
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 of agricultural
products
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 and of textiles
also
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 climbed, to roughly $32
billion
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. Gems and jewellery,
however
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, was the only sector that experienced a decline in
value
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, from about $43
billion
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 to $41
billion
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. In terms of
value
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 changed in percentage, textiles
export
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 showed the largest growth in
value
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 numbering 15.24 %.
This
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 was followed by engineering goods, petroleum
products
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 and agricultural
products
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, whose
values
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 of
export
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 earnings increased by 8.5, 3, and 0.81 % respectively. The
export
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value
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 of gems and jewellery
products
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,
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, experienced a relative fall of 5.18 %.
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