The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The Popularity of travelling to other

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has steadily increased over the past fifty years

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because people today have a lot more information about varying destinations around the world and almost every place in the world is reachable via a couple of flights. At the same time, criticism about the effects of

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destination

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countries

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has become louder and louder.

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, I believe

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the potential

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the potential

advantages of

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to

destination

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countries

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exceed

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, and

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brings way more to a

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than it takes from it. The main reason for my view is that local

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and

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receive many advantages from

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.

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, tourists bring additional

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to local shops and restaurants, which would not happen if

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did not exist.

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produces not only more workplaces for residents but new business opportunities as well.

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, governments are able to generate more tax

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from local

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and increase their

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part of the budget sheet.

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will lead to opportunities to maintain and improve local infrastructure and provide better services for citizens.

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, governments and varying

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can improve their global image

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tourism

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, and with a positive image particular country is able to attract different global

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and events to that area. Sometimes it is said that

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grows as it rotates, and in

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is especially true.

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, while

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and

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economy will flourish with a tourist

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, there are still

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of environmental disadvantages to

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countries

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.

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brings pollution and waste, and

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could possibly have severe implications

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local

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ecosystem and environment.

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, pollution generated from

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can produce health issues

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local residents or affect to

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of

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ecosystem and its species. To conclude, I believe that

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have

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lot

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more positive effects than negative ones

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particular

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country, and

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there are some clear environmental disadvantages of

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, those can be solved by waste collection systems, restrictions, and

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commuting

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systems.