Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Currently, families

both

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of

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parents

work are increasing in number. For

this

reason, it is important to consider who can take care of

children

. People have two different

opinion

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opinions

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for

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this

matter.

However

, some people think that

grandparents

play important role in

children

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children's

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upbringing, while others think that nursery school is the best choice. I

am partially agree

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with

second

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statement. On the one hand, it is argued that due to

both

parent

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parents

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work, so as not to remain uncontrolled,

children

are taken care of by other family members,

such

as

grandparents

. Actually,

this

is

both

thrifty and safer because

parents

rely on family members.

Consequently

,

this

creates comfortable feelings

on

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parents

.

Secondly

, it is irrefutable that being taken care of by

grandparents

enables

children

to learn their family

tradition

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nearer

On the other hand

, I firmly believe that

grandparents

don't have adequate experience to look after

children

, even some of them are physically feeble and inactive,

hence

parents

have sufficient reasons to put their

children

in

childcare

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a childcare

the childcare

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centre. Actually, one of the main advantages of nursery

school

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schools

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is that they have trained staff who have enough practical ability to grow a child.

Furthermore

,

childcare

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the childcare

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centre offers entertainment which comes interesting to

children

.

Moreover

, nursery schools

gives

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an opportunity to interact and play with others which will help them to enhance their communication skills. To conclude,

both

of them are up to the

parents

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parent's

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and

family

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family's

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financial

condition

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.

Although

how much

grandparents

are safer for

children

, childcare centres have professional employees and be looked after by experts will be beneficial for them to adapt

in

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to

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society easily in the future.