Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Currently,

both

parents

working

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families are increasing in number. For

this

reason, it is important to consider who can take

care

of

children

. People have two different

opinion

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opinions

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with respect to

this

topic.

However

, some people think that

grandparents

play important role in child upbringing, while others think that nursery school is the best choice. I agree with the idea of

children

must be taken

care

of

childcare

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centres. On the one hand, it is argued that due to

both

parents

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parent's

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work, so as not to remain uncontrolled,

children

are taken

care

of by other family members,

such

as

grandparents

. Actually,

this

is

both

thrifty and safer because

parents

rely on family members.

Consequently

,

this

is the

coziest

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way for

parents

.

Secondly

, it is irrefutable that being taken

care

of by

grandparents

enables

children

to learn their family

tradition

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nearer

On the other hand

, I firmly believe that

grandparents

don't have adequate experience to look after

children

, even some of them are physically feeble and inactive,

hence

parents

have sufficient reasons to put their

children

at

childcare

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a childcare

the childcare

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centre. Actually, one of the main advantages of nursery

school

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schools

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is that they have trained staff who have enough practical ability to grow a child.

Furthermore

,

childcare

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the childcare

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centre offers entertainment which comes interesting to

children

.

Moreover

, nursery schools give an opportunity to interact and play with others which will help them to enhance their communication skills. To conclude,

both

of them are up to the

parents

and their financial condition.

Although

how much

grandparents

are safer for

children

,

childcare

centres have professional employees and be looked after by experts will be beneficial for them to adapt to society easily in the future.