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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the advantages ?

#people #risks #lives
In our
lives
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 we have to take
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the risk
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risk
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 everything that we do . it does not matter
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 it our professional
life
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life
 . we always have to take
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the risk
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risk
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. in my personal opinion, I believe there are more advantages than
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disadvantages
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disadvantages
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 am going to elaborate
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that
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reasons below. On the one hand, we have to take
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risk
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for
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achieve
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things
 , because you cannot achieve anything if you do not try.
For example
, you have to invest
money
 if you want to
gain
 more
money
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stock market are very risky , but you have to take that step to
gain
 more .
samw
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same
 goes
with
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 your professional
life
, you have to sacrifice your current job or position
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achieve
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higher
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 position .
thus
, to achieve
things
 you have to take
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risk
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.
Secondly
, that makes you a strong
person
 . taking
risk
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 means you put your all effort into
this
 particular task and that means you at
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least
leastly
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 know that you give your best. that gives you , your inner peace .
however
,
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best advantage you can
gain
 from
that is
become
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 a strong
person
. After that, you become a
person
 who
capable
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is capable
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for
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of
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 so many
things
 in your
life
.
For instance
, you can face
to
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failures in your
life
 without scarring
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 you can invest more
money
 without getting nervous .
finally
, there are can be some small disadvantages, like sometimes you can lose more
money
 than
gain
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moreover
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 you can be really
stressful
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 about your
life
. it depends on how you manage
things
. In Conclusion, people have to take
risk
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risks
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 in their lives and it will be really
benefited
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for
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your future because you can achieve many
things
 and you became
strong
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a strong
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person
 .
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furthermore
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Furthermore
, there are can be
few
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 disadvantages , like you can lose your
money
 and you can be mentally ill.
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