Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are crippled by gridlocked traffic. What are the possible solutions for these cities?
Growing
number of traffic jams become a major problem in cities all over the Add an article
A growing
The growing
Correct your spelling
world
word
, due to the rising number of car owners. Correct your spelling
world
Although
it is a complex problem that affects everyone's life, there are solutions that would improve the quality of big city life.
First
of all, improvement in organization
of public transport may decrease the Add an article
the organization
amount
of vehicles on the roads. As far as there are not enough buses or tram lines people would Change the quantifier
number
chose
to drive Change the verb form
choose
for
their own Change preposition
on
that
would block the most important spots during rush hours. Correct pronoun usage
which
For instance
, rebuilding the underground in Warsaw decreased the traffic and improved the everyday's
life of many citizens. Change noun form
everyday
Additionally
, the prices of the tickets should encourage to chose
public transport over the car.
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choose
Secondly
, authorities of the cities should develop cycle paths that would convince many to move around on a bike. Although
ridding
on the bike in crowded places may be considered Correct your spelling
riding
as
dangerous and risky, people would not be afraid to bike Change preposition
apply
in
wide and safe paths separated just Change preposition
on
for
bicycles. Change preposition
by
For instance
, in countries of
Benelux where the cycle paths are more developed than in any other Change preposition
like
parts
of Europe, the majority of people bikes to Fix the agreement mistake
part
the
work or school because it is the quickest, cheapest and Correct article usage
apply
the
most convenient way.
To conclude, Correct article usage
apply
current
situation in the cities forces us to reevaluate opportunities to improve city driving. To decrease Add an article
the current
number
of the cars in town public transport should be reorganized and citizens should Change the article
the number
be encourage
to use their bikes.Change the verb form
be encouraged
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...
