Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social, behoviour ond lack of respect for others. What might caused this situation? How to improve it?
It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of
life
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life,
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growth
antisocial
behaviour and Add a hyphen
anti-social
people
have become less respectful of each other. This
essay intends to analyze some causes of this
phenomenon and suggest some ways to ameliorate the situation. Today, we live in an era of technology in which the whole Earth has shrunk and become a global village. Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the lnternet
, but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most Correct your spelling
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people
have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom, but their hearts desire even more. To satisfy their hearts
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hearts'
people
have become workaholics, and as a result
have no time for family and friends. Add a comma
result,
People
have become selfish, isolated and indifferent. Each person is busy in his own quest for more. To add to it, the youngsters who are at ease with the new technology think that the elderly are good for nothing and that is
why they don't respect them. The changing family structure is another big cause of this
phenomenon. Earlier, people
lived in joint families and the grandparents were there to supervise the children. Now there are nuclear families in which both parents go out to work, and children are left unattended in the hands of pervasive media like the TV and the lnternet
. No one monitors what they watch and they see the programs full of violence and crime, which makes them Correct your spelling
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anti social
. The pressure of consumerist society and peers Add a hyphen
anti-social
also
breeds anti social
behaviour. To add to it, the values of traditional culture are being lost and Add a hyphen
anti-social
people
are following the global culture, which is also
considered anti social
by the orthodox elderly. There are many solutions to Add a hyphen
anti-social
this
problem. To begin
with, people
have to learn to strike a balance between work and family life. Government
should Correct article usage
The government
also
fix the maximum hours a worker can work per week so that exploitation is not there in the job market. People
should revert back to the old joint family system. This
would be in the beneflt
of all. The children would learn moral values and the elderly would be well looked after. Correct your spelling
benefit
Negative
effects of excessive consumerism should be taught to the Correct article usage
The negative
people
. Media can play a big role in highlighting the good points of the
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culture
so that Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
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people
can adopt good social values. Neighbourhood associations should be set up to connect people
to each other. Summing up, anti social
behaviour and mutual lack of respect in today's times can be dealt with by taking simple measures, and individuals and governments should collectively take these steps.Add a hyphen
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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