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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is a good step and in fact beneficial in order to control the fatal
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 accidents, which are occurring on a daily basis, due to the reckless driving by many truck operators,
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 to retake the driving test every year. While
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 procedure is challenging on practical grounds, I am in strong
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 of adopting
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 approach.
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 essay will discuss my point of view in detail. Nowadays, a number of
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 casualties happen, just because of the irresponsible behaviour of heavy transport drivers. Most of them do not have enough training and got a
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 by a chance.
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 to it, many of them are not following speed limits resulting in deadly
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 accidents.
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, from my perspective,
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 is a good way to improve the safety of roads by reviewing the
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 of those, who are driving huge trucks once a year. Another benefit of revising the test is to make sure that the legal number of
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 trainers by checking records.
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 to it, retesting will put emphasis on motorists to act in a responsible manner
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 they try to improve their skills. Along with
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, several goods transport is heavily loaded and needs a properly trained and
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 person to drive, to avoid a chance of an accident.
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, reviewing the
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 may improve government records, and driving skills, and as well as
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 will give jobs to the right candidate. To sum up, I believe it is a nice way to improve the quality of
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 traffic and it has improved the quality of
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 traffic and it has a significant impact on controlling daily
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 accidents by encouraging large transport drivers to revise their driving
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 each year,
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 it develops a sense of responsibility in them.
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