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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phones ( cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Some countries process
payments
 using mobile phone
applications
, in
this
 context we will be discussing the pros and cons. The utilization of mobile phones has tremendously increased around the world in the 21st century. Cell phones are not limited to one age group, from students to adults they carry
this
 device.
First
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 of foremost to discuss the benefits, many individuals upload mobile
applications
 to their portable phones to process
payments
, to avoid paying either from credit/debit card or cash which leads to convenience, and they dislike carrying wallets with them, as a new trend they prefer to fashionably carry light. There are certain
applications
 and shops in order to attract
the
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users they develop a loyalty scheme, where they convert the users to become members and continuously get their members to visit them.
Furthermore
, the younger generation to keep up with the trend and up to date with their friends, they become members with many mobile
applications
.
Secondly
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the
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 drawbacks of using the mobile phone for
payments
, in order to register on the specific application the user needs to provide their personal information and account details.
This
 is a
risk
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 situation as all information
are
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 saved in the application
for example
,
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 if the customer’s phone is misplaced or stolen. There will be
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instance
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 where the vendors and clients face technology difficulties during
a
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payment is made and the client does not carry cash or cards with him.
Therefore
, in
conclusion
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 the advantages and disadvantages could be neutral making
payments
 using mobile
applications
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