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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way.

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Penalising and hitting children for their mistakes had always been a very common practice by the
parents
 of older generations years back.
However
,with time it has been acknowledged to be an illegal act and is strictly discouraged.Both physical and mental abuse has always been considered to be against the legal rules in
majority
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 of the foreign countries.It is
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quiet
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 unfortunate that a huge number of
parents
 still come up with
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arguments
arguements
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arguments
 in order to establish their rights over punishing their children in their own way.In my opinion,guardians can penalise their kids to teach them,but can never physically hit or abuse them as I will explain.
Parents
 of
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 century
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 much less patience than the ones before.
This
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 busy scheduled life.After facing
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 workload when they come back home and spend time and teach with their little kids,they get agitated and eerier very easily.By
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 their patience many of them hit their child
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 sharp objects.
This
 can cause real accidents and can even kill their child unknowingly. Nowadays,being tortured by severe and harsh punishments is leading to
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 of major mental disorders in
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 crowd.According to World Health
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,
statistiaclly
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statistically
 a significant number of
pediatric
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population
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 are being diagnosed with anxiety and depression.
This
 can cause serious harm to the growing population in the coming years.
Therefore
,immediate steps should be taken to change the current practices of a child’s
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 by its
parents
.Newer Laws and regulations should be passed and must be implemented worldwide to stop
such
 violence
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 the younger ones.
Parents
 must work immensely on their anger management and may
also
 try to be a bit more patient and empathetic while teaching them.They must be well aware of the fact that their little ones are growing.
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