You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his petformance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Benjamin, I am one of your fans and

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letter is to appreciate your great voice. You had a remarkable performance during your

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concert, so, I decided to contact you to ask for some advice to improve the quality of my work. I would like to explain more about it. It has been 10 years since I started playing the guitar, and I am interested in a variety of genres

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as Rock, Jazz and Blues.

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I learned different methodologies from various teachers, still I have quite a few missing skills. The most problematic part of my work is the ability to play and sing at the same time which causes the notes to become out of tune.

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, your concert showed your control over your voice while you perfectly play the guitar, and I thought maybe you can give me a few suggestions to fix my issue. I would like to ask you to help me address my problem and be able to synchronize my voice with the background theme.

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, it might be best to assist me with a video which allows me to follow your instructions, step by step. In the end, your help is much appreciated beforehand. Sincerely yours, Amirali

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

207 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

captivating
stellar performance
entranced
musical prowess
virtuoso
encore
melodic
harmony
instrumental skills
musical journey
mentorship
aspiring
collaboration
feedback
inspired
invaluable guidance
musical aspirations
appreciation
influenced
répertoire

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