Some people feel that social media encourages antisocial behaviour, such as bullying and cheating, while others disagree that this is the case. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, part of individuals believes that
such
as bullying and cheating type of antisocial behaviour stimulate by
the
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social
media
, while on
this
point some others do not agree.
However
, I think social
platform
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have many advantages rather than disadvantages and
this
essay will analyse the reason for both views in the following paragraphs with a reasonable conclusion. To commence with that social
media
objectives are not a secure line on the internet world. To explain it more, When we make the account on these social channels there is no identification process like that platforms do not require any government identity proof, so people make fake accounts on them and they play with the emotions of other people.
Moreover
, it
also
helps them to lead criminal
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activities
activity
activitie
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activities
.
For example
, In 2018, a criminal case had been occur in front of Delhi police in which a gang of 10 persons make
corrupt
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account
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accounts
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on WhatsApp and Instagram and
they
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sad to individuals that we run a trust organization to
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funds for children who are not able to get education by listening
this
citizen
agree
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to give donation because they emotionally blackmailed by criminals.
That is
the reason for blaming social
media
for
this
.
On the other hand
, many
of
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think that they learn about a new culture and up to date with fashion or trends.
Additionally
, they can communicate with their relatives easily those very far from them which is a very convenient option in today's era because everybody
busy
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with their work, so they do not have enough time to meet with their loved ones and they prefer social
media
at
this
situation.
For instance
, Todays time many parents send their kids
to
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abroad for higher education and they communicate with them through WhatsApp, Instagram and Facebook which are social
media
, which is used on the internet and the internet is cheaper than voice charges.
That is
why they like social
media
. In conclusion, every individual has their own perspective to view
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or negative side of
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any thing
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and in
this
,case some people argue that social
media
is not good due to security reasons and others tend that
they
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feel it is very useful in their rotten lifestyle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antisocial behavior
  • cyberbullying
  • harassment
  • cheating
  • dishonesty
  • positive social interactions
  • creativity
  • self-expression
  • opinion
  • controversial
  • debate
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