Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that there should not be public universities as they suggest education does not improve

society

. I strongly disagree as public

professionals

have to study depending on the job. The following paragraphs will highlight my opinion and some relevant examples. First of all, it is essential for

society

to have public services,

such

as doctors and lawyers.

However

, not everyone can afford the cost of

studies

. For that reason, the government

reward

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rewards

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to have

Verb problem

apply

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public

professionals

to improve

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for improving

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society

's health and rights.

For example

, many individuals in Brazil can not pay for private health, so most citizens use public health. In that way,

society

is benefited

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benefits

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from the costs of public

studies

. If there were no public education, people would not have many public services as there would not

have

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be

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enough

professionals

.

In addition

, as there is a very small number of people who can afford their

studies

, without the help of the government, even in private companies the number of

professionals

would be scarce and the prices of appointments would be extremely expensive. In

this

case,

for example

, just a few people would be able to have treatments.

As a result

,

society

would suffer without assistance.

To conclude

, in my opinion, public

studies

are essential and

society

is benefited from

this

.