There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you about

issue

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the issue

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bus

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service in my area,

Paramata

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Paramatta

suburb of Sydney. Since

last

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two

weeks

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the

bus

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service is not being operated as per timetable and

hence

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commuters are badly affected. The

bus

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timings are crucial to reach on time for public and employees. I have to reach to

office

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the office

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at 8:30 AM;

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, I am not able to manage the same due to mismanagement of

bus

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timings. The students are not able to attend classes as per schedule. I would like to suggest that

company

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the company

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shall intervene and take strict actions to run buses on regular timings.

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, Company shall

predefined

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all the routes based on the traffic congestion so

last

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moment route

change

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can be avoided. I would be happy to provide more details and

assistant

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if required. I am looking forward

for

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necessary

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the neccesary

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neccesary

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actions. Yours faithfully, John Derick

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
reliable
maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
unreliable
appointments

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