There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you about
issue
of Add an article
the issue
bus
service in my area, Paramata
suburb of Sydney.
Since Correct your spelling
Paramatta
last
two weeks
the Add a comma
,weeks
bus
service is not being operated as per timetable and hence
commuters are badly affected. The bus
timings are crucial to reach on time for public and employees. I have to reach to office
at 8:30 AM; Add an article
the office
however
, I am not able to manage the same due to mismanagement of bus
timings. The students are not able to attend classes as per schedule.
I would like to suggest that company
shall intervene and take strict actions to run buses on regular timings. Correct article usage
the company
Moreover
, Company shall predefined
all the routes based on the traffic congestion so Change the verb form
predefine
last
moment route change
can be avoided.
I would be happy to provide more details and Fix the agreement mistake
changes
assistant
if required. I am looking forward Replace the word
assistance
for
Change preposition
to
Correct your spelling
necessary
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the neccesary
neccesary
actions.
Yours faithfully,
John DerickCorrect your spelling
necessary
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite