You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other.you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter •say which points in the article you agree with .explain ways in which your town center is different from most other centers •offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer or f the article

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Dear Editor, I am excited and took great pride to write

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letter as I can see a few adorable things about my town's places.

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, an article which you published on the community parks and kid's play schools is really awesome and I did not even think about it in my dream.

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, as you see from east to south, there are huge differences among those centres and towns too. Having said that, in the south end, we have luxury high-rise buildings and

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, we have a very small and traditional house under one roof which is quite opposite.

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, I strongly believe that we have exclusive centres with different designs and mind-blowing theme parks throughout the town.

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but not the least, I am more than happy to guide you and show you all these mesmerizing places.

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, I would request you to please let me know your's availability for the same. I would really appreciate it if you could confirm your requirements in advance to execute the smooth tour without any

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issues. I look forward to hearing your response with dates and availability to see these spectacular places. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Thu Aug 18 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

199 words

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