Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live.

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letter of mine finds you in good health.I am extremely happy to hear the good news that you are joining the University of Delhi where I studied one year ago.Since I have lived there, I believe I might help you with some advice about your accommodation there. Let me share my experience.I stayed in an apartment which was barely one kilometre away from the campus.The best option for you to look for a living space is through brokers available in the vicinity of the university.They will be able to help you with all the procedures and

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you will have a smooth relocation. One mistake that you should avoid which many students make is that they ignore the amenities of washing clothes.

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,make sure the house has its own laundry room and you do not have to waste your time and money on the laundry services outside. I wish you all the best in your journey at the university. Yours truly, Poonam Malik

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live.

Fully explain your ideas

Better driver education for better driving habits is more effective than heavier punishments for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In many countries, children today have more freedom than they used to. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people think that in this modern world getting old is entirely bad. However, other people believe that the life of old people is much better now than it was in the past. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.