Learning depends not upon the personality or the methodology of teacher, but rather on student's attitude on his or her own learning. Do you agree with this statement?

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As we all know, learning is an indispensable process for any human being in order to live and survive in
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affinity towards their work of study rather than
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and guidelines of
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. Personally, I partly disagree with
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opinion, as both are equally important.
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impacts
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can bring to successful learning. Good learning can come from
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being self-aware of how important education is and how they can do their best to study.
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, a pupil who already has their goals set will be more likely to succeed,
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to one not doing so.
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, they have
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kind of mindset when they are going to do whatever it takes to get flying
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or scholarships, whether there is a teacher to help them or not. But having
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readily available is something you can not underestimate. In fact,
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who can not be disciplined enough desperately need someone
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them instructions and
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them to learn. So, in order to get the best of what you want to learn, it could be done with a mix of having the right mentality and gaining more knowledge through
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of
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themselves. All in all, pupils'
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and
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' traits and ways are both essential. I do not entirely concur with the statement because both play their part if someone yearns for effective study. Once
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' ways of teaching can corporate
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, learning will be more beneficial than ever.
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