Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

How to learn the
news
is a
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debated
topic in today world.
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there are some groups of
people
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that newspaper is the easiest
way
to learn information,
other
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others
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agree
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agreements
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that the media is a better
way
to learn the
news
. In my opinion, I side with the statement that media is the better
way
to collect information. The essay will analyse
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both sides before clarifying the conclusion. On the one hand, some
people
like to use
newspaper
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newspapers
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to know about the
news
.
For example
,
newspaper
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newspapers
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are very famous
with
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among
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the old
people
because it certified by the government so,
it
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they
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will bring
a high accurate information
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high accurate information
a piece of high accurate information
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.
Moreover
,
besides
that
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the
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obvious advantages, it will take away
of
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a day to update more
news
.
This
makes it hard to support.
On the other hand
, most
people
, especially, young
one
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ones
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think that the media is the best
way
to learn the
news
.
For instance
, the new update for every
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minute
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. It
also
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access
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many
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may
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many
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people
, it
also
have
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has
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some
feture
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feature
features
to watch, listen
,
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to, read
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read
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and read
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in
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on
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Facebook.
Thus
it
the
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is the
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easiest
way
to learn the
news
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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