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Some people believe that famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attentions to problems. Others think that celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #support #aid #organizations #attentions #celebrities
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empression
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impression
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 of someone's opinion about that well-known
people
 should be back up for the international aid
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organisation
organasasion
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organisation
 and make
people
 worldwide pay more
attetion
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attention
 to some certain problems. I think the famous can stay away from
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those kind of
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problems
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.
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 my opinion,
first
 of all, I think if the reason why someone
they
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pay a lot of attention to the international aid
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organisations
organizations
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organisations
to
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 be
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attracted
extracted
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attracted
 by the famous, maybe those
people
not
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do not
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 really care about the things that matter.
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 the thing that I have already seen in my motherland is total
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unbelievable
unbelieveable
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unbelievable
 and unreasonable, and the thing is one of the famous
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 his fans to help the children who are living in
remote
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a remote
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 and poor
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(especially
some
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place
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places
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 like Africa), but the action that he takes which
is only came
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 to that place for half a day,
then
 he comes back, he cannot do it by himself.
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,
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plenty
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plenty
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they
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choose to be back up of some particular organisations, It is not because they have a kind heart or something.
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, the true reason for
they
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them
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 to do so is the organisations will always pay them to invite them to assistant
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their
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 the other hand, the
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 of
the
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well-known
people
 in the
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organisation
organization
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organisation
, maybe it will let more
people
to
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pay more
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attention
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attention
on
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such
 a thing.
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 I think it does not make any sense. And,
for example
, if a famous only have a motivation which is to gain his reputation or property to support the organisations, I think it would backfire after all. Because if a man can do it well by himself,
then
 he will just make himself and even that
organisasion
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organisation
 a
nouch
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touch
 of
ridiclous
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ridiculous
 crowns, that will never be helpful to
intrnational
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international
 aids itself at all. To sum up, I think because
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most of those famous have not proven that they have good enough to do kind of these things,
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the one and
only
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 way for them
supporting
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 the international organisation is to leave them alone.
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