Some people believe that famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attentions to problems. Others think that celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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empression

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impression

expression

of someone's opinion about that well-known

people

should be back up for the international aid

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organisation

organasasion

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organisation

and make

people

worldwide pay more

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attention

to some certain problems. I think the famous can stay away from

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those kind of

problem

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problems

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.

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my opinion,

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of all, I think if the reason why someone

they

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pay a lot of attention to the international aid

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organisations

organizations

organisasions

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organisations

to

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be

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attracted

extracted

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attracted

by the famous, maybe those

people

not

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really care about the things that matter.

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the thing that I have already seen in my motherland is total

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unbelievable

unbelieveable

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unbelievable

and unreasonable, and the thing is one of the famous

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his fans to help the children who are living in

remote

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a remote

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and poor

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(especially

some

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place

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places

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like Africa), but the action that he takes which

is only came

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to that place for half a day,

then

he comes back, he cannot do it by himself.

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,

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plenty

pleanty

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plenty

of the star

they

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choose to be back up of some particular organisations, It is not because they have a kind heart or something.

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, the true reason for

they

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to do so is the organisations will always pay them to invite them to assistant

thier

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their

job.

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the other hand, the

participating

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of

the

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well-known

people

in the

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organisation

organization

organasasion

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organisation

, maybe it will let more

people

to

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apply

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pay more

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attention

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attention

on

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such

a thing.

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I think it does not make any sense. And,

for example

, if a famous only have a motivation which is to gain his reputation or property to support the organisations, I think it would backfire after all. Because if a man can do it well by himself,

then

he will just make himself and even that

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organisation

a

nouch

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touch

of

ridiclous

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ridiculous

crowns, that will never be helpful to

intrnational

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international

aids itself at all. To sum up, I think because

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most of those famous have not proven that they have good enough to do kind of these things,

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the one and

only

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way for them

supporting

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to support

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the international organisation is to leave them alone.