It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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expression of someone's opinion that
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driverless cars should
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in society and
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. I think
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acceptable for me. In general, two reasons which are
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why I accept that idea.
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of all, the traffic
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disease
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that the human driver is not dependable at all. Because it is
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thing for everyone
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in front of
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plenty of drivers who have
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already
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already
been drunk driving
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car and think about what if I would not be caught after all.
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acknowledged
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that human beings may forget the thing that they have known or learnt, which will make the driver forget about the driving skills that they need to know about in driving school
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so that the
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skills will
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year by year. Whereas the driverless car can perfectly solve the previous
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, the technology-driver(
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of the state of
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body and mental
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the
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does not have any desire
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, so it is
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impossible
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impossible
when the whole technology is mature to happen some
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caused by the drunk driver.
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the
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will never forget anything if you download them, so it can
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prevent
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prevent
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will be beneficial to the safety of
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and lower
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probability
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probablity
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probability
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disaster
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, even
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have
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not been mature
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nowadays
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, but after they have been well-developed, it is a really great thing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • sensors
  • human error
  • traffic congestion
  • mobility
  • displacement
  • fuel efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • pollution control
  • ethical considerations
  • legal framework
  • data privacy
  • overreliance
  • system failures
  • connectivity
  • decision-making
  • security concerns
  • economic impact
  • maintenance
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