Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems Do you agree or disagree?

Choosing a particular type and quality of
food
has become an important aspect
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human life as it has
enticing
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benefits of providing sufficient vitamins. The question of whether
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meat
in
food
or should strictly adhere to
vegetarian
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diet
has been a perennial topic of discussion.
This
essay agrees with
this
notion and will discuss the advantages of following
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diet
in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, vegetarian
food
helps us to achieve a well-balanced
diet
. If we carefully observe the biological cycle of a plant or a tree, we can understand the process of how it acquires nutrients. A plant receives nutrients naturally in the form of sunlight and water, which on
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by us can directly provide the required vitamins and minerals.
Moreover
, we can
also
include various types of plant products
such
as leaves, fruits, naturally secreted oils and many more.
For example
, a coconut which contains abundant minerals is naturally formed.
Secondly
, the
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over exploitation
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of animals can be regulated by following a vegetarian
diet
. Nowadays, due to the soaring demand
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meat
products, most
of
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the
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private companies are butchering
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animals on a large scale without even following the legislative rules.
Furthermore
, the bulk
meat
is being processed in uncleaned factories and stored for many days by adding preservatives.
As a result
, it becomes the main source of diseases that soon gets transferred to humans when consumed.
For example
, due to the emergence of technology over the
last
two decades, most companies are injecting chemicals
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meat
for longer preservation. Even
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is said to be originated
by
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consuming bats in some parts of China. In conclusion,
meat
should not be included in our
food
as a well-balanced
diet
can be easily achieved by consuming strict vegetarian
food
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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