many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can be suggested?

Many criminals continue doing criminal

activities

just after

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from jail.

Although

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phenomenon is attributed to a number of causative factors, effective policies can be adopted to remedy the situation. There are several

reasons

for offenders to commit

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rimes

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again.

Firstly

, one of the main

reasons

is

unemployment

. As people are not willing to employ or work with individuals with

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background

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, those who

released

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from prison

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not

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job opportunities. Being

unemployment

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or working with low salaries

make

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such

people

to

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commit crimes to make

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. To tackle

this

problem, governments can not only teach prisoners some skills to help them find a proper

job

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also

can provide them

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employment chances related to skills they have learned in jail.

Secondly

, being prisoned can not be

deterrent

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while the main

reasons

of

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committing

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crime

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such

as poverty,

unemployment

and mental problems remain unchanged.

As a result

of

this

constant difficult situation, those released from prison tend to continue doing criminal

activities

. As a solution, societies should find the conditions that result in committing crimes

by

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a period of consultation done by experts for offenders.

Then

they are able to solve the main

reasons

of

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criminal

activities

in society. To conclude, spending a period of time in jail can not prevent prisoners from committing

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crime

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because of many

reasons

such

as

societies’

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situation and

unemployment

. To tackle

this

statement, societies and governments should provide a condition in which the main

reasons

of

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criminal

activities

being solve

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and some job opportunities

being

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created for people with

criminal

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a criminal

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background

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.