Water pollution has been an increasing problem over the last few decades.What causes water pollution?How can we prevent this problem?

It is true that
water
pollution become a major problem in our country over the few years. There are several reasons for
this
.
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days more and more
people
's negligence
give
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a pathetic look to the environment and most
of
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the factories let out their products into the
water-bodies
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or
people
threw their garbage into the
water
carelessness.I think it is due to their ignorance and lack of moral responsibilities
towards
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the environment.It brings
the
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negative consequences to the environment,
for example
in industrialised countries most of the
people
suffer from
shortage
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of
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water
and because of
it
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government try to avoid it
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recycyling
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recycling
the
water
which already used
from
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the public.
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to
this
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it
also
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caused by coal-fuelled plants
which
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situated near the
water
bodies.These
type
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of plants recycled different
type
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of materials which have a negative impact
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the
water
and air. The
first
thing we do is
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reduce the number of factories in the city and taxed the
people
who threw the waste into the
water
bodies.We should teach the
people
value of the nature and show them the consequence which
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after
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decades if they do not follow the public rules. In conclusion,
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think government take
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massive actions to prevent them if not it causes huge problems in near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Toxic substances
  • Eutrophication
  • Algae blooms
  • Pathogens
  • Nutrients
  • Organic matter
  • Marine environments
  • Coastal ecosystems
  • Microplastics
  • Food chain
  • Hazardous chemicals
  • Mining activities
  • Industrial waste
  • Agricultural runoff
  • Sewage and wastewater
  • Oil spills
  • Plastic pollution
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