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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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Colours
 can affect how
people
 feel
this
 known to psychologists for many years and based on
this
 we should choose the ideal
colour
 scheme while decorating places
such
 as hospitals and offices and now in
this
 essay, we will discuss how true
this
 statement is and how
colours
 influence
people
's
health
 and capacity for work.
People
, in general, Do well when they are in a good environment and
this
 will usually depend on the
colour
 of the surrounding places a crucial role in
this
 as it has been proven that
people
 working and recovering in hospitals with bright
colours
 tend to be more efficient and recover faster
although
this
 not only factor as other things
such
 as work-life balance and seriousness of the injury
also
 factors into recovery
time
.
People
 who come out of a dark room feel instantly refreshed after seeing some bright
colours
 and tend to work more enthusiastically and the opposite can be said true for dark
colours
 as they send
people
 into a depressive mood and
this
 decreases their productivity and put them at risk for various
health
 factors. It has been observed that
people
 who spend more
time
 in light or bright
colours
 tend to be more healthy and productive and
people
 who spend more
time
 in dull or dark
colours
 are less productive and unhealthy compared to others. We can conclude that
colour
 schemes play a role in how
people
 feel but it is not the only factor contributing to how
people
 feel in places like offices and hospitals and
this
 could
also
 be true about
colour
 influences
people
's
health
 as the type of
colour
 they spend more
time
 around plays huge role in their
health
 and productivity.
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