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It is a trend nowadays to have a one year break in between passing out from school, and joining to the university. While, that period has many positive sides, like youngsters can enjoy a stress free time, however, there are some side effects too.

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one year
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 break in between passing out from school
,
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 and joining
to
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the university. While, that
period
 has many positive sides, like youngsters can enjoy a
stress free
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 time,
however
, there are some side effects too. There are many evident advantages
for
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 giving the relaxation
period
 to
students
 before their tertiary
education
.
First
 and foremost
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,
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this
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that this
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 help
students
 to get
a
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practical experience.
In other words
,
by
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doing small jobs in
this
period
 of time, provide them
an
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 opportunity to get experience,
along
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 with it, they can earn some money.
Secondly
,
this
 long vacation
refresh
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 their mind and they are more focused
towards
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 their
education
.
For instance
, if a student continuously
going
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 to school for 12 years, in comparison to that who came back after availing
a
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long break, there is a huge difference between the level of productivity.
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 fresh mind always produce better.
On the other hand
, despite there are several advantages, we cannot neglect
this
 side the effects of
this
 trend. On
the
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top
, the
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 main drawback of
this
 gap is it is reducing the interest among our youngsters towards
further
 studies. As many of the
students
 tend to do jobs
in
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during
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 that
period
, and many of them find working in an office much easier than doing studies.
In addition
 to it, earnings
also
 play an attractive role in it, like they can buy anything they want. So, they have to sacrifice their job in order to continue
studies
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, which leads to another reason for not pursuing
education
. In conclusion, as I discussed both aspects above, and found many drawbacks as well as benefits.
Thus
,
this
 trend has many constructive advantages for the
students
 who consume it in a wise way,
however
, it is
also
 the fact that
,
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this
 style lowers the interest amount our young generation towards professional
education
.
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