It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

I would appreciate it if you could take a moment and look over the subject ticket when you get a chance. Please advise as it has already been more than two months now. It is a trend nowadays to have a

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break in between passing out from school

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and joining

to

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the university. While, that

period

has many positive sides, like youngsters can enjoy a

stress free

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time,

however

, there are some side effects too. There are many evident advantages

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giving the relaxation

period

to

students

before their tertiary

education

.

First

and foremost

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,

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this

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help

students

to get

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practical experience.

In other words

,

by

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doing small jobs in

this

period

of time, provide them

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opportunity to get experience,

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with it, they can earn some money.

Secondly

,

this

long vacation

refresh

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their mind and they are more focused

towards

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on

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their

education

.

For instance

, if a student continuously

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to school for 12 years, in comparison to that who came back after availing

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long break, there is a huge difference between the level of productivity.

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fresh mind always produce better.

On the other hand

, despite there are several advantages, we cannot neglect

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side the effects of

this

trend. On

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main drawback of

this

gap is it is reducing the interest among our youngsters towards

further

studies. As many of the

students

tend to do jobs

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that

period

, and many of them find working in an office much easier than doing studies.

In addition

to it, earnings

also

play an attractive role in it, like they can buy anything they want. So, they have to sacrifice their job in order to continue

studies

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, which leads to another reason for not pursuing

education

. In conclusion, as I discussed both aspects above, and found many drawbacks as well as benefits.

Thus

,

this

trend has many constructive advantages for the

students

who consume it in a wise way,

however

, it is

also

the fact that

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this

style lowers the interest amount our young generation towards professional

education

.