Some people say that parents should decide on what kind of medical care their children should receive, while others believe that this is the state’s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion

Medical care of the children is a very important factor with respect to their
health
. Few people believe that it is the responsibility of
parents
to take care of their kid's
health
while some think that the state should take the step regarding their medical aid. In my opinion,
Parents
are responsible for their baby's medical care.
First
of all, when a baby is born, it is the liability of the hospital staff to provide proper
health
support.
For example
, if he/she is weak and needs blood
then
Doctors should arrange it for him/her. After that, When the child is handover to their owners,
then
all the necessary medical backing becomes their responsibility of them.
Parents
do better know about their offspring's
health
because they remain close to them 24/7.
On the other hand
, few people
also
think that the country should take authority over the medical support of kids. I
also
agree with
this
fact but in terms of finance because some families cannot afford the expenses of medicine. In other countries e.g. United kingdom, America, Germany etc, Government bear all the expenses of the medicines for their children while in Pakistan, It is the opposite. In our country, State does not bother to pay attention to the medical support of the children. To conclude, the Medical backing of the heir is the duty of both the kingdom and the
parents
. Few societies think it's the Government's headache while Some think the other side. I have explained my opinion in a very detailed manner with examples.
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