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You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to store manager. In your letter, Complain about the problem Propose action for the store to take Request conformation that this is agreed

#product #store #work #manager #action #request #conformation
Respected Sir/Ma'am, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I have purchased a
television
last
 week from your store which is not working properly.
Last
 Wednesday, I visited your branch in Kitchener. I was impressed by the features of the recent invention of the
television
. The customer service representative whose name is Yash Patel helped me with the whole process of buying including the introduction of
television
, billing, and delivery. I believe that the sound system is not working properly as mentioned during the time of purchase. It feels like
this
television
 is not worth it. I informed the main branch to solve the problem. The main branch asked me to send you the invoice for the product and request letter. I am attaching both mentioned documents with
this
 email and hope that you will take an action as soon as possible by sending me a new
television
 of replacement. I look forward to hearing back from you soon. Faithfully yours, Saleha Mansur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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