You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

#month #programme #uk #head #course #participants #events #organiser #organizer #interest #role #information

Dear training manager I am writing

this

letter in order to demonstrate my enthusiasm for the social event's organiser role which has been recommended for the

tutorial together with asking for some

further

explanations if it would be possible. I have had plenty of experiences in participating in overseas workshops as well as

last

year's community event that has been held in Toronto by our company.

furthermore

, I strongly believe

this

appointment will have extremely efficient for my

further

position as a market expert as a consequence of improving my leadership skills.

secondly

, I would kindly appreciate it if you could send me an email as a complement in contemplation of our mission trip. If you have any questions or would like to do an interview, please feel free to contact me anytime at 09347689728 or [email protected] Thank you in advance. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, M.dehbashi

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

154 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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