Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others contest those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. What is your position? Discuss both sides in your response.

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Nowadays, most people like to live in flats that have new designs. These approaches to building designs cause various problems other than their impact. The point related to my opinion is mentioned in the ensuing paragraphs.
First
of all, the main reason I oppose the
second
argument is based on safety. Because some cities have
buildings
that have different structures
such
as the shape of a ship or the Pisa tower, that arrises so many safety issues.
For example
, earthquake is the main burden for these type of structures. The other reason is that causes damage to the earth to some extent. In wider, these
buildings
have extra-pilling than only that lie in a hanging position. So that the pilling that causes serious effects to the earth.
Secondly
, the higher growth in these types of
buildings
is just because of urbanization. Most people like to live in cities other than villages. That helps to reduce their daily tensions and easy accessibility.
Besides
greater increases cities cause lake of living space.
However
,
this
newly designed building mainly focused on how to use little land space for making huge
buildings
. In conclusion, the government should take necessary steps for the construction of new
buildings
and proper monitoring done by using a government servant.
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