Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and gie your own opinion.
It is widely accepted that education has an indispensable character in
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an individual
the individual
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can have nothing to compete with others, not to mention a country. Some Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
people
harbor
a belief that individual who is cultivated in the region should contribute to the place growing Change the spelling
harbour
them
up, while others stand the reverse Correct pronoun usage
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viewpoints
. From my perspective, it is a controversial issue which deserves an in-depth discussion.
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Initially
, the front and centre in its favor
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favour
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that, based on our moral culture, everyone is taught to be thankful and grateful as a child. Since most Change the verb form
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people
living in Taiwan is
fostered by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
this
beautiful island, it makes sense to devote what we learn or what we have to this
blessed isle whenever we are capable of
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Moreover
, those who are highly educated and specialized in professionals in Taiwan usually cost more resources from the government, or speak more precisely, from taxes. Therefore
, it is reasonable for those intellectuals who are nourished by this
place to contribute their professional skills back to this
society. In this
way, the small and beautiful heaven can be competitive and thus
survive persistently.
At the other end of the spectrum, such
a pivotal role does freedom plays in many realms of contemporary
world. Freedom, as we learn, is Add an article
the contemporary
the
basic human right that even parents cannot deprive Correct article usage
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child
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children
Besides
the aforementioned, some highly educated people
argue that it does not make sense to limit their will to work at
wherever they want. The point they stand up with is what they earn nowadays is through their own efforts. To accomplish the achievements, some Change preposition
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people
spend more time studying harder than others, sacrificing their sleep and childhood, etc. Therefore
, they should be free from
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also
physically.
In sum, giving back certainly and undoubtedly has many merits in the development of the
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nevertheless
, there are assorted of
ways to give feedback to the mother place. Change preposition
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For example
, people
can have great success in the other country and donate lots of money back to her
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mother land
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motherland
Accordingly
, I personally believe that it is unreasonable to limit people
to stay at
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