Your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with, except for one thing. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – What do you like about the uniform? – What don’t you like about the uniform? – Make suggestions how to improve the uniform.

Dear sir or madam, My name is Alan White, a repair technician in the Repairs and Maintenance Department. I am writing to give opinions on the recent new winter
work
uniform
consultation. Generally speaking, the colleagues of my team are quite positive about the new changes to the
uniform
, the material seems to be more durable, as you may
know
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our job nature guarantees scratches. It is
also
thicker, which is an important merit because sometimes we need to do
work
in the server room which is freezing cold.
Nevertheless
, there is one thing we want to raise to your attention. Similar to the old
uniform
, we do not have enough pockets on the trousers. Having these pockets can certainly bring higher efficiencies as we can assess tools easier in the course of our
work
. If it is up to us, we would like to have two more pockets on the left side and another pocket with a depth of at least 15cm on the right side to contain longer tools. Thank you for all your time, I am looking forward to hearing from the human resources department about an updated version of the
work
uniform
. Yours faithfully, Alan White
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