In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend

Nowadays, it is impossible to not experience any changes in both traditions and cultures. One and the most conspicuous of them is the size of modern families which has changed drastically. In my point of across, it has not only a downside but

also

an upside which will be scrutinized in

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essay,

accordingly

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Firstly

, a few centuries ago people used to have extended families and it truly helped them in that

time

in terms of work labour.

Nevertheless

, the requirements of the modern world are now different compared to the past. To clarify, due to advances in technology, a vast majority of jobs are digital and do need any human force.

Additionally

,

currently

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life has become extremely busy and

demandable

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which attributes to have not sufficient spare

time

to look after their babies meticulously. Owing to that, a small family is an auspicious choice for each of us.

Furthermore

, in lieu of not being able to treat each child equally which is really anomalous, it would be much better to have one and take care of him or her relatively well. By the means of that, the bond of members at one home will be much stronger than in large families

On the other hand

,

besides

its mentioned con it may

also

have a mighty pro, respectively.

For example

, if there are plenty of members in the family, they may have a lot of fun with each other.

Moreover

, in the future, as parents will be older and lose some physical abilities, in that

time

they will have a great chance to get

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of their all children every

time

.

Thus

, there is no problem for them in terms of being alone when they are

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. To sum up, after taking into consideration all possible aspects which can affect our notion of

this

statement, it is clear that having less

time

for each child may strongly enervate the link between them.

Nonetheless

,

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for

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, older people might have fewer opportunities to be cared

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their children.